Marketing

Development:
Intro/first paragraph on p. 1 seems to be missing some words.
Proposal: "Development of LibreOffice maintained the pace of the previous year, with close to 300 committers active during the year 2016, and an average of almost 80 developers active on a monthly basis"

LibreOffice online:
- when jt is integrated -> when it is integrated

Florian to write the financial page still, including thanks to donors and supporters

Simon will work on the volunteer page and provide some further insight into the board work

Proofreading pending for TDF in 2016, infrastructure and native language

For final PDF we'll also do team, board & MC page

Some smaller changes for the PDF (and to be factored into the German translation by Florian)

• Blogging / Social media
  • I'd like to see more education type words in the text explaining what we do here: it is fundamentally a teaching / messaging thing - so lets say that ? =) "educating our users as to the latest changes"

• Certification
  • /he will be asked by email if he is still interested/
  • s/he/they/ is more helpful - through that whole section.

• Road to LibreOffice 5.2
  • I'd emphasize the social, learning aspect of working on LibreOffice code: 'solve bug and regressions, learn C++, improve their programming skill, and generally make LibreOffice..."
  • I love the volunteers thing; can we add a "we thank our volunteers for theiroutstanding contributions" to the heading (?)